Is this sentence natural for daily conversation? If not, please teach me the unnatural parts. I used to go to a gym regularly about a year ago. Last year, I had gained a lot of weight and recorded the highest weight ever in my life. That’s why I decided t (2024)

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I used to go to the gym regularly about a year ago.
Last year, I had gained a lot of weight and recorded the highest weight ever in my life.
That’s why I decided to lose weight and joined a gym.

Considering my character, which is lazy, I needed to be strict with myself to keep up my diet.
So, I chose the morning membership , which allowed me to use the gym from 7am to 10pm.
When I first started, I would go everyday and did weight training and cardio exercise.
I felt great after I accomplished a daily quota.

But this hard work didn’t last long.
After almost a month, I found it hard to wake up early and go to the gym.
As a result, I gave up my diet and gained more weight.

However after this failure, I realized that I could work out at home as well.
At home, I needn’t be concerned about others and I can move as I like.
In addition, there is a bunch of stuff on the internet.
My favorite is a fat burning dance video on YouTube.
I can work out and sweat a lot while having fun.
I’m more suited for dancing for cardio than running.
Now, I’ve been doing this diet at home, and I feel that I’m burning fat.

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@NatsueM

I used to go to the gym regularly about a year ago.
Last year, I had gained a lot of weight and recorded the highest weight ever in my life.
That’s why I decided to lose weight and joined a gym.

Considering my character, which is lazy, I needed to be strict with myself to keep up my diet.
So, I chose the morning membership , which allowed me to use the gym from 7am to 10pm.
When I first started, I would go everyday and did weight training and cardio exercise.
I felt great after I accomplished a daily quota.

But this hard work didn’t last long.
After almost a month, I found it hard to wake up early and go to the gym.
As a result, I gave up my diet and gained more weight.

However after this failure, I realized that I could work out at home as well.
At home, I needn’t be concerned about others and I can move as I like.
In addition, there is a bunch of stuff on the internet.
My favorite is a fat burning dance video on YouTube.
I can work out and sweat a lot while having fun.
I’m more suited for dancing for cardio than running.
Now, I’ve been doing this diet at home, and I feel that I’m burning fat.